A sonnet from the dark

This post is written for the Best 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted by Sasikumar Raja Blogs at Beginner


Ghost shadow
She did not scare me..For she was the one who loved me selflessly and I loved her back

Rain,
thunder,
banging flaps of windows,
sleepless me.
Lightening and a glimpse of her.
She cant be here, she is gone to
heaven.
Another glimpse of her. May be she ain't. Maybe she came back
for me, My mother.
Lightening and her gnarled photograph instead where she stood.
Reality strikes.
And I howled in pain.

18 Obiters:

Sasikumar Rajappan said...

Fantastic expression of emotion, and feel... I loved it..:) best wishes.. take care...

thefactfiction said...

Thankyou sasikumar :)

Irfan said...

Nice...

thefactfiction said...

Thanks :)

Anupama K. Mazumder said...

Very moving!

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thefactfiction said...

Thanks Anupama

A Great Liar said...

Btfly expressed. A haunted little piece this one!

Btw, first time here. Following your blog. :)

Wish you all the best with the contest...

thefactfiction said...

A great lier....ummm shall I believe what you said :p
Thanks a lot :)

A Great Liar said...

@thefactfiction: Of course you shall. Now that I have voted for your piece. :)

thefactfiction said...

Awww thats real sweet of u

Green Speck said...

This really touched the heart ... well written !!!

thefactfiction said...

Thank you :)

deeps said...

maybe only 2 individuals understand the depth of it; you and her
nice work

thefactfiction said...

thank you deeps...guess you have too

Pomy said...

Wow! An awesome 55 fiction. You did justice to the entire plot, great idea :)

thefactfiction said...

Pomy Thank you :D

Mohit Sureka said...

i like the blog. :)

the factfiction said...

thanks mohit :)

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